I picked CWTATL because of all the ones I wrote it was the closest to an actual scene. Also, I think these occurrences are terribly sad, which, for some reason, made me want to write it.
Great idea, and I like the title. In fact, I think it does a lot of work for you, which may allow the setting of the scene in the first sentence to be even more brief, stripped to its essentials. Do we need the bench, for example? And maybe her reaction could be presented more economically, as well, as a gesture, perhaps?
I picked CWTATL because of all the ones I wrote it was the closest to an actual scene. Also, I think these occurrences are terribly sad, which, for some reason, made me want to write it.
ReplyDeleteGreat idea, and I like the title. In fact, I think it does a lot of work for you, which may allow the setting of the scene in the first sentence to be even more brief, stripped to its essentials. Do we need the bench, for example? And maybe her reaction could be presented more economically, as well, as a gesture, perhaps?
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